We had three meetings last week. Our first meeting was workshop about cause and effect paragraph. We worked in pair as usual. My partner in this topic was Fia. her paragraph talked about the effect that caused by facebook social networking. Generally her paragraph was good enough. But I found some simple mistakes in punctuation and using capital letter. She didn't use the capital letter in the place it should be used and use it when it was not needed. When I asked her about this matter, she said that it have been her habit to write in that style. For she gave this reason I could not said anything but to change her habit. Since this habit was not good for writing.
The second meeting was used for the last three presentation. The presenter were Trias, Lilis, and Zaky. Trias presented paragraph which she thought it was persuasive. Almost the whole class member disagreed with her because her paragraph only persuade in the end not in the entire paragraph. Finally we got a conclusion that hers was exposition paragraph. The next presenter was Lilis who presented two paragraphs. There was not any problem in her first paragraph. But we found the problem in her second one. The problem was about the topic. The following and the last presenter was Zaky. Her paragraph was clear in type. Therefore no one disagreed with her argument about the type of her paragraph.
We had second workshop in the third meeting. The workshop was about classification. I reviewed Lalang's paragraph. His paragraph was so brief and quite short. It was about kinds of animal based on the way they gave birth their children. The mistakes was not so far from the matter of punctuation. Then I thought we have to be more aware about this simple but important thing.
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