Nobody Is Perfect

We had workshop for both first and second meeting in this week. Since we had done all presentation.
We reviewed about process analysis in the first meeting. I reviewed Aris' work. He told about how to cook rice. I had some difficulties to understand his paragraph. Perhaps it was because I didn't know some words he used in his. I also found something incorrect in her sentence structure and punctuation. The way how he used adjective clause was a bit confusing me. But I thought it was because the very minimum amount of fullstop in his paragraph. After I read again, I could understand what he meant and I could give him explanation about my opinion for his paragraph.
The second one which I reviewed was Iswatin's paragraph. The type was definition. Her writing was defined about iqab in Sunan Ampel al-'Ali Islamic Boarding School. Hers was generally good and easy to be understood. But, yeeaahh... nobody is perfect. I still found some simple fault in it. The fault was the one which I almost always found in others' writing and also mine.
So, Let's be better with simple things..