Last Wednesday, we had workshop in pair as usual. The
paragraph at that day was comparison and contrast. We were allowed to write Two
paragraphs (one for comparison and the other for contrast), or one paragraph (make both
comparison and contrast in one paragraph). I wanted to make the simple one.
Thus, I made one paragraph for both types only while my partner separated them
into two paragraphs. Her paragraph was very clear, so I didn’t find any difficulties
about hers.
The following Friday, we had presentation from some members
in our class. I was the first presenter. I thought (and hope) there will be
some of my friends who disagree with my opinion about my paragraph. But everyone
were agree, maybe it because mine was too clear. I felt a bit disappointed
because of this. Both Aida’s (Kajol) and Rois’s paragraph was cause and effect
paragraph. Rois’ paragraph was emphasize about the effect and the cause was not
clearly mentioned. While Kajol’s paragraph was emphasize about the cause and
the effect was hidden. And it made some of us could not recognize it easily. In
Aris’ paragraph we were confused to classify it into one type of paragraph. The
problem was we could not find the main idea (Again!) and the composition was
confusing. The next presenter was Ima.
We have had a simple debate before we agreed that her paragraph was a report. Aida
(Mufrotul Faida) was the last one. Hers was an illustration. Everyone has different
idea about the topic in it. After we reread it several times we could find the
topic. It was the man about whom the writer explained in the whole paragraph.
Those meetings emphasize one thing to us. BE AWARE TO FIND
THE TOPIC. The topic is not always in the first sentence of paragraph. We have
to read the whole paragraph and understand what is something being talked in
it. The meeting in last Friday was remind us about the lesson we have got in
the weeks in advance. So, Keep Spirit to study Guys!! Ganbatte!! :D ;)
yes I agree with you chy...
BalasHapuswe have to read all sentences, not only the first sentence to find the topic and topic sentence.
I often make mistakes because of it.