Yesterday Meeting..

Firstly I want to say "I'm so sorry for my attitude on last Friday meeting."
I don't know why and what happened with me. Actually I felt enthusiastic whet I came into the class, but I felt a bit sleepy when the discussion was running. However it was not a big matter because I was really able to catch the topic we had been discussing at that time.
Last Friday we had four students presented their paragraph in front of class. They were Putri, Yogi, nita, and the last one was Octa. We found some confusing things during the discussion. From the first presenter, Putri, her paragraph is clear. But Ms. Vita asked her to correct her paragraph into a better form. The second presenter is Yogi who made the whole class become confused because of her paragraph. From his paragraph I could learn that we can not make one paragraph by combining several paragraphs, because it will make the purpose and the main idea of that paragraph unclear. Next is Nita. She has classified her paragraph as descriptive but we disagree with it. Because we can not find the part which describe the main idea in detail. Later we found it as illustration paragraph. The last is Octa. Her paragraph was really clear as descriptive paragraph. It was describe the main point clearly.
The discussion was very interesting and exciting. I was enjoy it although with my half-opened eye. From this meeting I can learn that unperfect thing will make our life become more colorful. So, never afraid to make a mistake Guys!... :D
Keep Spirit!